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邮件标题：
[申请号] - [你的姓名] - [申请专业名称] - Application Status Enquiry
称呼：
Dear [招生官员的姓名或 "Admissions Officer"]，
邮件正文：
自我介绍
首先，简要介绍自己的姓名、国籍、学术成绩和语言成绩等背景信息。
申请目的
明确说明自己申请该大学和专业的主要原因，包括对该大学的热爱、对所申请专业的兴趣和研究计划等。
研究计划
简要概述自己的研究兴趣或计划，特别是如果申请的是研究生项目。
期望与承诺
表达对未来的期望，如希望在该大学取得优异成绩，并承诺将努力学习。
其他信息
如果适用，提及自己已经获得的其他Offer，并询问是否可以提前处理住宿和签证事宜。
结尾段落：
表达对招生官员时间的感激，并请求回复申请状态。
结束语：
使用适当的结束语，如“Yours sincerely”或“Best regards”，并附上自己的全名和职位头衔。
附件：
如果需要，附上个人简历、推荐信或其他相关文件。
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示例邮件：
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Subject: Application Status Enquiry - [申请号] - [你的姓名] - [申请专业名称]
Dear Admissions Officer,
I hope this email finds you well. My name is [你的姓名], and I am writing to enquire about the status of my application to the [大学名称] for the [申请专业名称] master's program.
I am a [你的国籍] national with a strong academic background, having completed my undergraduate studies in [毕业院校] with a major in [所学专业]。 My academic achievements include [具体学术成就，如荣誉学位、论文发表等]， and I am proficient in [语言成绩，如IELTS/TOEFL成绩]。
My interest in [申请专业名称] stems from [个人兴趣或职业目标]， and I am excited about the opportunity to pursue this program at [大学名称]. I am committed to studying diligently and aim to contribute positively to the academic community.
In addition to my academic qualifications, I have [简短提及相关工作经验或实习经历]。 I am confident that my skills and experiences will enable me to make significant contributions to [大学名称] and the [申请专业名称] program.
I have already received offers from other universities, but I am particularly interested in [大学名称] due to its [特定优势，如教授声誉、研究设施等]。 Therefore, I kindly request that you update me on the status of my application at your earliest convenience.
If possible, I would also like to discuss the possibility of early accommodation and visa arrangements. Please let me know if there are any materials or forms that I need to provide to facilitate this process.
Thank you very much for your time and attention. I look forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours sincerely,
[你的全名]
[你的职位头衔]
[你的联系电话]
[你的电子邮件地址]
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请确保在发送邮件前仔细检查语法和拼写错误，并确保所有信息都是最新和准确的。
